Avatar Summer Needs Home Working Progress


#1

I’m making a summer avatar for the summer of course

I would like everybody’s opinion of what they feel about it and they would make any minor changes obviously everybody has a different opinion but still would like to hear from you

I have no way of storing this with the team be able to help out here with people like it ? @chris


#2

The hips are 2 wide, should be the same as the shoulder width.


#3

Yeah, wide hips do make it look a little “off,” maybe narrow them down a bit at least.


#4

It looks fine to me. The body shape gives it some character. just what you need in toon land.


#5

The hips are mabye a litte bit to width. but the first impression where. nice avatar.
If it’s easy to make a picture with smalelr hips we can compare.


#6

Boy am I ever glad I wasn’t the one to say “she’s got a bit of a fat arse!” lol (but hey, it’s trendy these days!


#7

here is a close-up on her face still needs tweaking a little but getting there

I’ve also stretched out her shoulders a tiny bitand sorted out her hips


#8

Perhaps a tiny hint of forehead crease lines, maybe some freckles to lessen the plastic sheen look that often happens to avatars.


#9

The proper fix for that plastic look is an implementation of subsurface scattering but I don’t know when our rendering engine will support that.


#10

Agreed, but since specular and subsurface scattering & diffusion is missing, adding some surface details helps a lot.


#11

Nice. No need to constrain to ‘perfect’ body proportions. Differences add character and realism, IMO.


#12

Okay next step to see how it looks when it uploads this is how it looks so far


#13


Seems pretty good little bit of tweaking maybe but I’m pretty happy with the results in HF
and she even smiles